Mini 2
Here's our second mini assignment for May. . .a little exercise for
making
our writing more descriptive. Choose ONE of the lines below and rewrite
it
to be much more colorful and descriptive and full of feeling. . .you may
rewrite it as a single sentence, or as a 2-line rhyme if you prefer.
4. There were
trees and flowers in the park.
4. Fruit and wildflowers grew
rampant,
the grove seemed untouched by any inhabitants.
5. I felt sad
when I heard the news.
5. I was wracked with grief,
when I comprehended the confession.
6. The dog ran
down the hill.
6. The rabid canine raced
up the steep incline at an incredible pace.
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